I am doing Spanish at GCSE and I need help with a few paragraphs. I would like to know what is wrong with: 'La semana pasada, fui de gimnasio con mis amigos porque queremos para manternerse en forma. Comimos coseas que contenia muchos de calcio como el queso ya que fortalece nuestros huesos. Cuando termine la escuela, me gustaria ser my sano para que el chicas de salir conmigo.'
My teacher says it is not accurate so please can somebody help? Can you just reply with the corrections? Many thanks!!