Hi there,
I need some help with translations. I tried to use the "machine translators" but it resulted in very choppy Spanish and I would like the translation to flow as it would in normal conversation.
In any case, here is the passage I tried to translate: (Please bare with me as I tried my absolute best even thought I'm not the best at Spanish)
Me despierto a las siete y media de la mañana. Primero, me ducho y me visto. Me cepillo los dientes y me maquillo. Luego de desayunar, voy a clases en la escuela. Tengo clases hasta las una de la tarde. Despues yo conduzco a casa con my familia y comer el almuerzo (I'm not so sure about this sentence...I want to say that I drive home with my family and once we get home we eat lunch but I'm really not sure how to say it). Entonces, paseo a mis perros y trabajo por cuatro horas. Después, estudio y hago mis deberes. Al final, ceno y miro la tele. Voy a la cama cerca de las diez de la noche.
Does this passage follow all conventional Spanish rules and are there any mistakes that I made? By the way, I'm always open to any suggestions/comments you may have to make the passage flow better or sound more pleasant overall. Thanks for all your help guys!